Saturday, July 9, 2011

What are your thoughts on my prologue?

It's good, the sense of struggle and danger you put in the beginning always attracts readers. You keep having allusions which is good so that readers have a sense of what your character is going through even if they've never been on a battlefield or accident. I find you take your time with the details and stretch out dramatic scenes, this is not a bad thing just your writing style.

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